what a little to much drum off beat
This is the best comment ever. :D
not bad, but is it posible to make it more exiting
to long for the basic sounds. make it more exiting and it will be interesting.
infro was promissing, a pitty for the rest
more to live
in the begining nice but you need to make more to it, make it alive!
the intro was resenable, but when does it start? never
a simple tune
well i don't think you will have a lot of costumers, it dosn't smack me in the face, it is a disapointment.
not bad at all
keep the good work coming
you have potential, but you are searching. keep on trying. maybe i can help out.
Thanks for listening! Indeed it doesnt feel quite finished... It needs some cleaning up... but I made this just this morning... Thats the thing with most of my songs... I make em in a rather short time, put em on the web and see what the weakpoints are! Well your more then welcome to give some advice!
pitty you used not your own music
Pity you can't appreciate lyricism, or spell.
1 octave to low
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